FINAL T'S CORRECTION OF INFORMATION SHEET by V.Ilic

Vera, here are some notes to guide you further in your corrections.


Correction Notes for Making New Friends

- way of meeting – way to meet
- joining in – joining
- people who enjoys – people who enjoy
- differently – definitely
- sports acting – sports, acting
- Young Amateurs – What kind of amateurs?
- a big firework – the big fireworks
- ways of earning money and having – ways to earn money and have
- working … work – Avoid repetition by saying, e.g. ‘…which will take you five hours only ‘.
- listen music – listen to music
- CD player – a CD player
- all kind – all kinds
- besides … also – Repetition: omit ‘also’.
- a large tennis and basketball court – large tennis and basketball courts
- best way possible and be welcome – best possible way and welcome
- So – So,