T's Correction for INFORMATION SHEET by M.Acimovic

Marko, here are some tips which could be useful for your writing.

- It is not clear whether ’New Activities’ paragraph includes the paragraphs that follow or it is independent. If it includes them, you should have some other different paragraphs; if it does not, it should be longer.
- You could have included some semi-formal ways of meeting people: e.g. A Swimming Day for all students, Lectures and Forums organised by the school management.
- couple - a couple
- big swimming pool - a big swimming pool
- many other - many others
- you can try yourself on culture field – you can have a try in the culture field
- sections – clubs
- specially – especially
’Specially’ and’especially’ are interchangeable when they mean ’for a particular purpose’;
Use ’especially’ when you want to give emphasis to something or someone.