T'S CORRECTION FOR ARTICLE 2: STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT by I.Sinakijevic

Gradac Gorge 

Ivana, here are some correction notes that can help you write your final version
- Your writing is too long – there are 388 words.
- sound of the train – sound of a train
- take a bit of patience – have a bit of patience
- in early hours – in the early hours
- to monastery – to the monastery
- twitter of owls – hooting of owls
- when we heard – when we saw
- We passed next to the monastery – we passed the monastery (went past the monastery)
- to river – to the river
- there was a lot of camping fires – there were a lot of camping fires
- because she needed a bathroom – she needed to relieve herself
- she came back. And she was screaming – she came back screaming
- her a blizzard next to her neck – put a lizzard on her neck
- more down – further down
- decide to give us a bit more of enjoyment in nature – decided to treat ourselves to some more
enjoyment of nature
- wanted – set off
- one wonderful place by river but upper – a wonderful place up the river
- streak – railway track(s)
- the tunnel – a tunnel
- had put – put
- rails the – the rails
- it – the tunnel
- had heard – heard
- a sound – the sound
- stocked next – pressed ourselves
- it – the train
- stood on our legs – keep our balance
- by regular track – along the regular path (to avoid confusing with railway track)