Final T's Corrections for FORMAL LETTER by I.Sinakijevic

Ivana, here are corrections for the formal letter. I will send you the rest at 8.30 p.m.

- advertisement – For what? Extend it with : ...for a grant from the Green Trust
- In my further letter – in this letter
- the certain details – certain details
- because – this should be deleted to make the sentence clearer
- have not ever met with recycling – has never had any experience in recycling
- and it is also one of the factors which affected towns’ budget – , which is also one of the factors that
seriously affects the town’s budget
- containers – separate containers
- this – It seems as if this refers back to solving the problem and you cannot add a problem to a solution
of a problem; expand as follows: In addition to the problem of wasting reusable glass
- pollution –air pollution, you did not develop the problem of air pollution
- Are you going to put up a paper container as well?
- by – should be deleted
- the trees – trees
- on it – should be deleted
- in purpose to – for/with the purpose of
- We will this – We will advertise this
- dustman – dustmen, or even better, refuse collectors
- The given money we will spend – the grant money will be spent
- the sponsors which will help us to buy the machines. Sponsors who will help us buy machines. Which
machines?