1ST CHECK OF ARTICLE 2: STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT by I.Sinakijevic

Ivana, please polish your article. I put some parts to be improved in bold.

STRANGERS IN THE NIGHTThe sound of the train…Four teenagers in the tunnel…Just a few seconds are
left…
You’ll have to take a bit of patience to read the rest of the story. It all started in early hours on 1st of May. Three girls and one boy had gone on traditional morning hiking. One of these girls was me. We decided to go to the monastery Cells and then go down to the river Gradac. On our way to monastery was a big forest.
The trees were spread widely apart and they were tall but it was dark because it was 3 o’clock AM. We could hear the twitter of owls and rustling of small animals and bugs. We were scared. We heard a scream of one of our friends and when we heard that it was just a frog, we got relieved. We soon realized that it even wasn’t a frog; it was just a stone which looked like it. Later, the atmosphere was much better, the sun was rising and we were laughing. We passed next to the monastery and went down to river. It was very cold and there was a lot of camping fires which were still burning. One girl went to one small forest because she needed a bathroom. Just a few seconds after she left, she came back. And she was screaming. One drunk guy thought it was interesting to put her a blizzard next to her neck.
We went more down and set down to eat our breakfast. When it became warm and sunny we decide to give us a bit more of enjoyment in nature, so we wanted to visit one wonderful place by river but upper.
We again passed through another thick but much smaller forest and we were on streak. We had to pass through the tunnel. We had put our ears next to rails the and listened. There was no sign of a train. We were brave, so we went into it. After 20 meters we had heard a sound of the train. We run out and stocked next to the stone wall. It was so fast that we hardly stood on our legs.
We survived and we went straight back home by regular track. Otherwise I wouldn’t be able to tell you this story.