FORMAL LETTER by I.Sinakijevic - 1st CHECK

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Mira

Dear Sir or Madam,
I saw your advertisement in newspapers and I would like to apply for it. In my further letter, I will give you the certain details about my project which will be based on recycling.
Because Valjevo have not ever met with recycling and this caused an increased level of pollution and it is also one of the factors which affected towns’ budget.
In order to save the money for making new glass for bottles, we can put containers for glass and plastic. In addition to this, the level of pollution is higher by each day and we should take care about trees which are giving us oxygen and a chance to breath. By making paper, we cut down the trees and ruin our environment. On the other hand, by recycling paper we could use recycled paper for printing newspapers and magazines on it in purpose to decrease the level of cutting trees.
I would arrange for about twenty students from Valjevo’s Grammar school who will visit citizens and inform them about new containers which we would put. We will this on local television and we will also speak to the dustman from Valjevo and make an arrangement with them. The given money we will spend on containers and we will find the sponsors which will help us to buy the machines.
If we make this project, other towns will take us as an example and do the same. And Serbia will be a step closer to European union.
I hope you will concern my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Ms Ivana Sinakijevic