ARTICLE AND NOTE by I.Sinakijevic - 1ST CHECK

Dear Ivana,

I am sending you the first correction of your writing - as before, I put the dubious sections in bold. I am waiting for your corrections.
Mira

A BIG PET

Would you like to be one of the first who have the biggest pet in the world? Adopt a whale and you’ll be.
‘Green Issue’ represented the ‘Adopt a whale’ the whale adoption costs only £17.5 and you have a new pet and you also get a video cassette in which you are able to find out the most exciting pieces of information about whales like how you make difference between them, how friendly or dangerous they are. Furthermore, there is a poster for your room or your kid’s room, a brochure which consists of different types of information about whales and an Adoption Certificate so that you can visit our whale in each part of a day. In addition to all of this, you’ll get black and white photo of your whale and a sticker for you bag!
By adopting a whale you are getting the opportunity to get in touch with this wild creature and make an amazing experience which you or your children will never forget! You will have your own Willy (I suppose you have watched the movie ‘Free for Willy’)!
Although all of these things sound fun, they are real and the money from this action will be given to charity for protection and survival of whales.
So, who wants a big blue pet?

Jan,
I saw an advert and the idea is very original but not suitable for Peter. We don’t even know if he has a video and it is boring for elder guy. He won’t have time to look after him while he is at work and he studies a lot. I think we should buy him the book, some parody about dogs.
But your idea was great for a college magazine and I will introduce this idea to our colleagues. What do you think?
Let me know asap.
Ivana