MAKING NEW FRIENDS

Dear Ivana,

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Regards,
Mira

MAKING NEW FRIENDS

SCHOOL

So you came to Vagym and you don’t exactly know how to make some new friends? Read the pieces of information below and find out.

PEOPLE & PLACES

The first thing which you need to know is that 90% of students here are very communicative and friendly and you will easily get in touch with them. For that purpose, I am suggesting the thing below:

1.CLUBS:
Join some of the school clubs! In Vagym, you can join a debating club if you would like to try your abilities as a talker or if you would like to how to do it, drama club which you could join if you are a good actor, music club for singers and musicians… We also have science clubs for math, physics, English, etc. In addition to this, there is a Young Researchers club, which consists of three groups: astronomy, speleological, biology and the membership is very cheap. There are meetings once a week when you are learning interesting stuff about these sciences and go to some excursions where you’ll be able to study stars, plants, …

2.VOLUNTARY WORK:

If you think that you are able to draw something nice on our wall in school club or you want to be a DJ or a barman in school café, apply for it! You’ll be able to meet a lot of people and make some nice chats and the friendships will come!

EVENTS

If you want to go out and spend a nice weekend, try next cafes: “Bagdad”, Cosmo”, “34”. Those are the cafes where most of our students go out at weekend nights. As concerning the further events, I suggest “Van Gogh” concert which is going o be held newt Friday in “Factory” and the performance in theatre which Vagym prepared for new international students-YOU. Visit those places and you’ll surprise how much new friends you’ll make.