INFORMAL LETTER AND MEMO BY IVANA: 1ST CHECK

Dear Ivana,
I read your writing and put the parts that could be improved in bold, italicized them or inserted X's for the missing information.
I look forward to your first revision.
Mira

INFORMAL LETTER

Dear Joanna and Mike,
I am writing to congratulate you on your brave decision to step into marriage and to wish you best luck and many happiness and kids in your future.
I also want to apologize because I will not be able to be presence at the moment when you step in our holly union because I have to go to International trade Conference which will be held in New York from 12-15 February . And I would like to say that I am so sorry because of that but this is very important for my further business carrier and it is the opportunity which I can get only once in my life from my boss.
I was sitting in my room yesterday and I remembered the day when I first met you and my first thought when you talked to me about your relationship: when will they get married, they are perfect for each other.
Sheila told me that you are going to Venice for your honeymoon and I think that’s a great choice: a city under the water with its wonderful old buildings-it’s so romantic. Don’t miss the chance the see Verona and Romeo & Juliet’s home.
I was wondering if you could send me a list of your wedding presents which will help me with choosing the best present for you.
Are you planning to buy a bigger house or apartment? Are you planning to have a kid? I hope you’ll prepare pictures from your honeymoon and wedding so that I can see them when I come to visit you after your honeymoon.
I am looking forward seeing with you soon.
Best wishes,
Ivana Sinakijevic.

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In order to inform you that I will be able to attend the international trade conference in New York, I also wanted to inform you that I have a valid passport and I will send it to you tomorrow. I wanted to ask you to send me the detailed information about the dates of departure and arrival.
Best regards, Ivana Sinakijevic